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Noises in the Closet
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Noises in the Closet |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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It is dark in your room You feel something loom You hear a noise It comes from your closet You hide under your covers But your curiosity Gets the best of you You crawl out of bed You sneak up to your Closet door You think a moment Before you open it You reach for the handle Then you hear the noise Once again You rethink it And stand there like You are stupid Finally you throw open the door And a bat flies at you You shriek and hit the floor Then the bat turns human And says, "I want to suck your blood." You shreik again Then you pass out And don't wake up again Until the next Night falls Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
the_loner_23 - I will be very, very careful if I hear a knock at the door... BC |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I love this! What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I hear so many stories about these sounds that people hear and how horrified one can feel then all a sudden it is just ones cat or little daughter coming in! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderfully eerie, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well you are a lot braver than I would ever be! I literally do pull the cover up---but not over head, just to my neck! My eyes are as big as saucers as I peer into the darkness waiting.... EA |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You shouldn't have opened the door! LOL  The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
a fun diversion, only you should have onpened the door after getting your knife. |
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