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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas 
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Through my window I see you walking up the steps ready to make your first move, and even though I see it coming, and even though I am not ready I will allow you to come in. You have traveled way too far to be with me You have waited far too long I don’t see me leaving here I don’t see you in my future. Still, you spent a lot of money on me, and I liked getting all that attention. I will not follow you though and I hope you can understand You live way too far from me and it’s a far fetched idea you have. How far are you willing to go? Will you keep sending me candy When I tell you I am far from your reach? Do you love me you ask? I will think about that one for awhile Maybe it’s that I love you loving me, how’s that? Will I come with you ? Hmmm I don’t think you have a chance. Go ahead come in if you want It still doesn’t mean anything ya know? I’ve just been playing games do you think you’re ready to be hurt? Stop looking at me with those eyes You cannot reach my soul. Stop kissing me with those lips Your not winning me over. Take your hands off my back I don’t like being rubbed. I am calling the shots here and I’m sorry but that’s the way it goes. I am far too proud and ………….. I am far too good at lying... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... to myself. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I liked that  I don't believe I've seen your first post, but I absolutely loved this one Never be normal! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Riveted...I know you. ThisDiamond |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Salty. If you're writing so distinctly that Kathleen "knows you" already, I have a feeling you're going to find a whole passel of poets who will be reading your works... Please, check your e-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed this open-hearted write, it has a powerful ring of truth. Welcome to Passions! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
HI ya Salty, and welcome to passions....I know your writings from Bianca (bop) (LC) I was there for a while before I came here....I know/hope you will love this place....Welcome aboard good to see you here.... Lauren~ (Greeneyes) Deep inside the stillness |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Thank you all so very much, you have definitely made me feel welcome. I have been fumbling my way around trying to figure out exactly what I'm doing, but I'll get there *S*. I really do like how this place is ran, and I sure like seeing some familar faces here too. Thanks for stopping by. How do you add those cute little smiling faces? :} well, this one will have to do for now Salty |
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