Open Poetry #23 |
Somewhere, I Must Be |
Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
I thought of you today and questioned if, in a kinder, gentler world it might have been a fairytale a boy, a girl youth, innocence and the wonder of it all I held time in my hands but now, when leaves fall I no longer try to put them back on the tree I understand the season, the reason and when stars fall I no longer try to catch them for they have somewhere they must be you once said to me, "perhaps in the next life" at that moment I felt leaves falling around me, the reason and I knew then there is somewhere I must be far beyond an endless dance apart a different world perhaps a different season but touching all that is real, dancing to a song of our choosing-- because, I have tried and I cannot hear the song without you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Yes, and that place you must be is all inside of you, and if love can listen to your heart that makes the joy ever more omnipresent! (sigh) May nothing but a smile always fill your heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sandpiper, I really love this and it I will keep. It is heartfelt, beautiful. It's special. I especially like: "When leaves fall I no longer try to put them back on the tree." and.... "I cannot hear the song without you." Thank you so much. Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I came, I read...I left a little quieter in my walk. Enjoyed my friend. jwesley |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
How beautiful, even in it's sadness. Some lesons of life are hard to learn. *********************** but now, when leaves fall I no longer try to put them back on the tree I understand the season, the reason *********************** |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
such transience this life.......... time waits for noone |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Very well written and with a large dose of humility. Thank you. etoodog |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
The music's in the heartbeat....it must be. Enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a sad write |
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