Open Poetry #23 |
'Father' |
Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I spun in circles turning the other cheek until I'd bore a hole into the ground a well of self doubt that never runs dry You can't understand why I haven't forgiven the tyranny of your kingdom of lies 'Father' a title you took but never earned Your words stung worse than your belt ever did |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Raphael Your words chilled me to the bone and were filled with so much hurt and sorrow. Thank you for sharing your innermost thoughts with us and I wish you well. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
Really nice I was speechless after reading it |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
Really nice I was speechless after reading it |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Cool! Spinning just like Superman did in the movies when he went straight into the sewer after the villain! Thought only Superman was able to do that! How foolish of me! LOL Thanks for sharing! God Bless! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Raphael, I send many angel hugs of healing your way, sweet friend, no one should ever be abused like that and my heart goes out to the many in the world who do, this is sad, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks everybody who wrote. Thanks for bearing through it. Not an easy write but felt the need to purge. It's more a dedication to my brother who suffered the worst and the longest. Raph |
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