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0 posted 2002-11-24 12:09 PM



Beneath the sheer of subtle calm and quiet phrase
Surges forth in molten pool these restless ways
To be alight in uncontrolled momentums course
In tender channels fire storms of brilliant force

No longer at the mercy of whatever circumstance
Sweet revelry to leadeth the into this crimson dance
Beneath the slip of negligee or public view
An effervescent gold in tame seeks to discover you

In lush convergence of the fire and fragrant flower
Beginnings rear another bound in fondled timeless hour
To reach into the depths of you with simple lace succumb
My breadth before the flame to sphere and burn in silent sum

Beneath the slight of hand embodied shivers oxidize
Such sweet incinerations blind within these loving eyes
To smolder only after heights of certain fused degrees
To boil forth in flowing rivers red, these ambient seas

Copyright Kkh 11/22/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-24 12:30 PM


You have such a beautiful way to describe
the flames of passion...as no other can..

Excellently done Kathy...

SmartChick
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2 posted 2002-11-24 12:31 PM


This is a beauiful poem. Thank you for sharing it. I enjoyed reading it.
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3 posted 2002-11-24 06:39 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, I love it, you speak of the essence, the gist of passion so well, through the most pastel shades of its flame, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-12-20 04:55 AM


*mouth hanging open*
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