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whiskey
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0 posted 2002-11-24 09:32 AM


This Is for my soul mate Adam
I love you

"I Feel you"

I close my eyes
I see your face
Engraved
Within
My mind

I dream
I want you
Your hands
Touching
My body

I feel my heart
Beating
I know your there
Your heart
Dances
In time
With mine

I ache within
I feel you
Your soul
Entangled
With mine

© Copyright 2002 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
1 posted 2002-11-24 10:18 AM


I found myself drowning within the spirits of this ....

(leaning over the bar)
     "Give me another shot of whiskey!"

Love hangovers like these, keep 'em coming!!

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

2 posted 2002-11-24 10:32 AM


Perfect for a dreamy Sunday morning...
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2002-11-24 10:38 AM


whiskey
A lovely write.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2002-11-24 11:29 AM




i hope adam knows this too
heartfelt poem

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
5 posted 2002-11-24 04:47 PM


I want to read this to my love while she is snuggled in my arms...very lovingly written...

...believe what your heart feels...

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