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Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
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0 posted 2002-11-24 12:54 PM


Never cry out
that you love me
when you don't
my love.

It's not right
to swear
you need me
when you wish to rove.

Promises are fine
my lovely
but not if they lie.

Never say
you love me dearly
when you mean

good-bye.

[This message has been edited by Radrook (11-24-2002 04:01 AM).]

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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-11-24 06:17 AM


I would never say never to you. This has wisdom and brevity in a perfect combination.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Radrook
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2 posted 2002-11-24 01:55 PM


Hi Kethry!

Thanks for your kind comforting words!
Glad you enjoyed the poem.
God bless!



Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-11-24 06:53 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Radrook, if there is one thing I hate more than anything in the world, it is to lie, and I see it all the time and it disgusts me, and if I ever told a lie, I would feel awful and dirty! (sigh) I hope love speaks nothing but the truth to you as you are so deserving of faithfulness, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Radrook, thnak you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
4 posted 2002-11-24 09:02 PM


Very well done, my friend....

jwesley

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