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0 posted 2002-10-15 09:02 PM



she twirled and jumped
she spun and leaped
steped forward and back
and bent down to her toes
when the song was over,
she bowed to an invisable audiance

© Copyright 2002 Liz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-15 09:05 PM


Aw, how sweet. Been there, done that.
I like this.


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2 posted 2002-10-15 09:07 PM


This is so sweet. I like it

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2002-11-20 02:52 PM



but the applause,
she heard that...
on the Wind...

enjoyed this...reminded me of little ones

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (11-20-2002 02:53 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-11-20 03:56 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, the spirit of innocence glissades here, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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