Open Poetry #23 |
Gentle Reverie |
kellinjar Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 40New Brunswick, Canada |
I close me eyes, I tell you how much I care my minds eye traces the gentle lines of your hair my chest slowly expands, I breathe you in your scent drifts under my nose, pure without sin my lip quivers, I remember your touch lightly on it brushing gently across the skin, making me commit my heart reverberates deep within my chest cavity drawn towards you, locked within your gravity my soul pulses within my being, feeling you close touching my core, sweet love you did diagnose the answer true, the cure for my dying spirit say you love me true, for I wish indeed to feel it |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
kellinjar, this was very neatly done. I felt the softness of the mood. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Thanks for sharing. God bless! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mathew, I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for sharing it with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the title brought me in, I enjoyed the softness. |
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