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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Clouds passing overhead like time So many full moons yet to view Can’t waste a moment I’d like to share them with you If my name escaped your lips I’d feel beautiful, renewed Your fingers through my hair Would be as the wind flowing through To climb to the top of a mountain And sit until the stars shown bright The heat of shared conversation Would shield us from the cold of night Silence as we viewed the grand oceans Knowing all truth was somehow yours and mine Salty smell forever planted in our hearts No words needed as we share cheese and wine [This message has been edited by Zinsser (11-23-2002 06:44 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a nice moment Connie ( although I think you mean waste instead of waist)  M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, nice little romantic piece, I like it |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfectly lovely Connie. Much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Zinsser - nice romantic write, cheese and wine, now that would do just fine... BC |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey, I want some of that cheese and wine...of course I want the rest of it too...and some say romance is a thing of the past....hmmph! Wonderful... jwesley |
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