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Thought Footprints |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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...there to trace what was said even so far as to see through sediments beneath our feet to the quality of sounds that became words... so neat to enjoy images set out so simply... as grains of wet sand subject to our passage the mind does provide that sandy terrain to discuss dreams...then retain splashed meanings. there to instill hope between rise and fall of tides that wash all prints away even so far as to perceive nuances of sound impressions. |
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Sybil Member
since 2002-09-12
Posts 73Midwest |
There. Well done! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Martin! Much enjoyed! ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes well done... I enjoyed |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martin, yes, you did say it very well. "Love makes the world go around" |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
so much in a footprint!...  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Martin, this is wonderful, sweet friend, and if only we can excavate from where the tide smoothed out the footprints without tearing its intricate balance and uncover the wonders of every pair that lays them on the sand! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
"the mind does provide that sandy terrain to discuss dreams...then retain splashed meanings" Well said! "I am a sky where spirits live. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
to enjoy images set out so simply... as grains of wet sand subject to our passage the mind does provide that sandy terrain to discuss dreams...then retain splashed meanings. very well stated Martin. Very well written. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Does the sandpiper know better than we to pick through grains wash it's webbed feet and swallow a clam for a thought  [This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-23-2002 11:15 PM).] |
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