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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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I'm supposed to be working, But my mind flickers in flames of you, I'm supposed to be living, But i've forgotten to function. You're my blissful therapy, That drives me quietly evermore insane, I know i'm in trouble, Though you're not to blame. Every word you etch in my mind, Achingly matched sights, Make these eyes smile, Whilst they sorrowfully cry. The music of our hearts play, I think of your laugh, And long to catch your eye, Thankyou for being mine. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. [This message has been edited by gemjop (11-23-2002 02:07 PM).] |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
I'm sure that special someone would be thrilled by your heartfelt write.I enjoyed your efforts here. Live like it's your last day... |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing. God bless! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for sharing it with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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