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Constance
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0 posted 2002-11-23 09:51 AM



as I slept and dreams with wings of downy-soft enfolded me,
and cradled longings drifted off somewhere-
starry midnight darkness held no threat for me at all-
for you were there.

it was as if my sleeping mind was on a silvered tether,
leaving me with little choice-
but to trust that I would travel safely out until,
I heard your voice.

and then in magic ways, the darkness lifted just enough,
that I was able to perceive the comfort of your safe embrace-
andtaste of sweetest wine was in my mouth as night,
revealed your face.

if dreams are coded truths that I must use my heart to read,
then I have chosen to decipher mine in ways that lovers do-
and know, upon my waking, that my soul will always, always,
find its way to you.

[This message has been edited by Constance (11-24-2002 07:42 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-11-23 10:31 AM



A very nice read, Constance...thank you.

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2 posted 2002-11-23 10:36 AM


very nice read... I enjoyed
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3 posted 2002-11-23 10:37 AM


Very beautifully done,  may all dreams be
as you have woven these...

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4 posted 2002-11-23 10:38 AM


Constance
A delightful read, enjoyed.

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Gaia
5 posted 2002-11-23 11:43 AM


Hello friend, I can't recall having read your work before (my loss) but hope you will soon post again. I especially enjoyed this:
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if dreams are coded truths that I must use my heart to read,
then I have chosen to decipher mine in ways that lovers do-
and know, upon my waking, that my soul will always, always,
find its way to you.

Zinsser
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6 posted 2002-11-23 02:06 PM


if dreams are coded truths that I must use my heart to read,
then I have chosen to decipher mine in ways that lovers do-
and know, upon my waking, that my soul will always, always,
find its way to you.
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Beautiful

My name is also Constance   : )

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2002-11-23 02:28 PM



finding your way to  your love in the darkest
depths of the night is magical,isnt it?

Martie
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8 posted 2002-11-23 02:56 PM


So good to see you posting!  This was very lovely work!
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9 posted 2002-11-23 03:38 PM


This was very peaceful. Good to see you again.
jwesley
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10 posted 2002-11-23 09:07 PM


ejoyed it all, my friend, but in particular the first two lines...loved those...

jwesley

Robert Adamson
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11 posted 2002-11-24 01:04 AM


Your little dream is like a wonderful house of vivid memories. Thank you.

etoodog

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