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Open Poetry #23

Thoughts Within Reach

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2002-11-23 09:02 AM

Thoughts Within Reach

Capture imagination
Then let us proceed
A sea of tranquility
Is all we will need

From out of the blue
Let thoughts unfold
Sharing sky palette
Of orange and gold

Key into daydreams
I'll keep you a place
To replay and repeat
Each loving embrace

Travel shore to shore
To white sandy beach
Evermore we can be
Thoughts within reach

Come dance me slow
Then whisper caress
Take hold my dreams
Lips lovingly express

Let far away thoughts
Reach across miles
Where words of love
Adorn you in smiles

Hope©2002

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-11-23 10:48 AM

nicely written...and the longing sweet, soft and loving..
I enjoyed

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-11-23 11:17 AM

"Come dance me slow
Then whisper caress
Take hold my dreams
Lips lovingly express"

Nicely penned, Hope!

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

3 posted 2002-11-27 12:38 PM

Nice!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-11-27 02:42 AM

geez, how'd ya get to be so romantic?

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