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kruser
Junior Member
since 2002-11-08
Posts 11


0 posted 2002-11-22 07:37 PM


this burning star, this sacred heart
The smell of cigar smoke
and innocence floating softly out the window


throught the soft light i feel your smiling lips
and the sweetness of your breath
It enraptures me,...takes me,..makes me,.....Forget


And in this kaleidoscope of love
You make see colors i never knew existed
You make me feel the way i never thought i'd feel again

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2002-11-22 11:05 PM


Enfolded me in the pleasure of the read and see. ThisDiamond
Radrook
Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648

2 posted 2002-11-24 04:28 AM


Wow!
Thanks for aharing.
Enjoyed!

ctowen
Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
3 posted 2002-11-24 04:33 AM


Many things can bring love to mind ...
only one can bring it to one's heart.

Excellent feel to this, good work.

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