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Kissing in the Rain
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Kissing in the Rain |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea 
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Crescent, ivory moon, please light upon frail brow of trembling thoughts, that can't connect, only collect, as petals, dead, strewn on the ground. Winter is death, I know its chill, as rigormortis tries set in, but oh, the days along the glen, wildflower picking in the rain. How fun it was to sit and dream, of what we hoped life would contain. Our clothes were soaked and we so laughed and kissed 'til morning came again. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very soft..and very good... I enjoyed this one a great deal.. quite romantic.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiuflly romantic, sweet friend, this brought a huge smile to my face as I dream so very much of singing in the rain with my Joanna and making her so very happy and feel special and loved! (big hugggsssss) I wish happiness to always rain upon you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Michael, I only want to tell you how carefree and happy this sounds. Enjoyed. Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Michael - lovely write dear poet. Yet...bittersweet. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is delightful, Michael... Oh how lovely it would be to have those days back again  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Michael! Much enjoyed the read tonight. ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Quite a good memory, and a great read. Thanks for all your kind encouragement. ThisDiamond |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh yeah, memory lane here...*sigh* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...james |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
romantic rain, in the background of his first kiss, never forgotten this brings it back again,thanks |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sweet memories conjured up after reading this...beautiful. Michael.. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Auguste Well done enjoyed the read. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michael...the sweetest love is sometimes the memory. This was beautiful! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A truly beautiful write...even though it was a little on the damp side... Thank You Michael...this one surely must be special for you.. |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
This is a very emotional composition. It makes you feel all warm and happy inside. A remarkable read, pure love. Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it? |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Everyone, thank you all so much. I wish I had time to respond to you individually, but today I'm very rushed and won't be able spend much time online. Your responses mean more to me than you know. Thank you! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
hehe.....here I thought walking in the rain was awesome.....but kissing..... what could be more perfect? Loved this one m'friend. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Excellent imaging... could see it all... Regards to you, Sudhir |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Lovely write, enjoyed it very much Charisma |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michael, I sure do like this idea, with my Gary, of course. "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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