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Lovemaking Comes in Many Forms
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Lovemaking Comes in Many Forms |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea 
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Her voice is softly dripping rain, her passion, that of lightning glow, her hair, the scent of autumn leaves. Such beauty, rare, I’ve come to know. Her eyes, green pools of liquid light, like moth, I’m drawn into their gaze. She keeps in trust each word we speak. I love her in so many ways. The windows fog, this night of chill, as amber fire paints body, bare. A glass of wine, a quilt on floor, in front of fireplace we will share. Though hearts beat quickly on this night, you do not rush a work of art. Lovemaking comes in many forms, but first, you feed her mind and heart. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Beautiful! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Amen to that! Beautiful, beautiful! and so true m'friend! I am keeping this one and framing it! You're a classy, sensitive man and that's something to be proud of. You need to teach seminars in North America to ALL men! This is a gem!  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Well. Well. Well, Michael! You never cease to amaze me, and leave me speechless. This is surely beautiful, such as your own soul must be. Such tenderness..... Thank you, it is quite enjoyable. Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OOOH YESSS Michael!! You've have penned this perfectly!!! Exquisite write m'friend! ~Big hugs for this keeper!!~ ~Let your heart guide you... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Michael, this is so very true, sweet friend, there are so many ways but what makes a love truly special is the frequent feeding of the faithful flame! (sigh) This is so well said, swet friend, your sensitive heart always lights these pages, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Finally, a guy who KNOWS!!!! *grins* Beautifully done I'm so cute! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michael, friend, you must have given lessons to my Gary before I met him, because this is exactly what he believes, too. Thanks so much for sharing these beautiful thoughts and feelings. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michael It takes time to make a work of art, so is it with love. Such a tender poem, my friend.  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sending champagne thoughts to both of you. ThisDiamond |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is amazing! L~ Deep inside the stillness |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Michael for the lesson...you write with passion...and experience... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Her voice is softly dripping rain, her passion, that of lightning glow, her hair, the scent of autumn leaves." ok, you knew I'd love this part...didn't you  this is a tender write dear friend of mine, I do love this. Gonna keep it too. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"She keeps in trust each word we speak" very lovely writing Michael |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Karilea, it's always nice to see a reply from you on one of my poems. Thank you! Melissa, You're so sweet, I feel very complimented, even blushing. LOL! All I've said in this poem is what every man should already have enough common sense and respect for women to know. Thank you dearly, my friend. *hugs* Pat, Such a nice thing to say...thank you very much. Nancy, Thank you and Big HUGS back. Noah, "what makes a love truly special is the frequent feeding of the faithful flame"...I don't think I could've said it any better, my friend. Thank you! Skyfire, Yes, I know...smiles here...thank you! Ethel, Gary sounds like a wonderful man. Yes, some men do know what a woman needs and it appears that you've found one. Thank you! Martie, Yes, it takes time...patience...thank you, sweetie. *hugs* ThisDiamond, Thank you for the champagne and for enjoying this one. Lauren, Thanks for the "amazing" my friend. *hugs* to you. scorpio, Thank you for the nice compliment. I see you're new here. Welcome to our home. Susan, You're also a dear friend and yes, I knew if I said anything about "rain" in this poem that you would like it. LOL Thank you and hugsss. Maureen, It's so nice seeing you here. Thank you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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