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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-11-21 09:18 PM


This heart is aching
When will the this pain leave me
Hopefully real soon

11-21-02


© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-21 09:35 PM


Your talent grows so large in these gems so small. ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2002-11-21 10:52 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way as I know these tears will end soon! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-11-21 10:55 PM


Sue, don't you just love to write these little things? You've sure said a lot in these few words, friend.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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4 posted 2002-11-22 09:19 AM


and 'soon' can seem so long, when it's a heart aching

plaintively done

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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