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0 posted 2002-11-21 07:52 PM


One drop of water
fell upon the land
Then I saw the world in a grain of sand
White as mountain snow,
So few white ones,
Am I one in a million?
Are you waiting for a sign?
Sky blue eyes,
told many lies,
Are you lost yet in mine?

Never be normal!

© Copyright 2002 Liz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-21 07:56 PM


Wind - this is really well done. Enjoyed this to-night. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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2 posted 2002-11-21 07:58 PM


Thanks Chris. I haven't seen you for a while. Where have ya been?

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3 posted 2002-11-21 08:11 PM


Liz, you never cease to amaze me with your talented poetry.....and from someone so young, too.
Thanks, little friend, for sharing your feelings and thoughts with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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4 posted 2002-11-21 08:12 PM


Thank you, Ethel. I appreciate your poetry too.

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5 posted 2002-11-21 08:14 PM


Such a beautiful feel to this write...could see the future...
ThisDiamond

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6 posted 2002-11-21 08:19 PM


Thanks Thisdiamond, thats a way I did not see it. Interesting though. I love seeing things from other people's perspectives

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7 posted 2002-11-21 11:01 PM




(sigh) Oh Liz, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I wish for the truth to come whispering out of the horizon and speak to your heart! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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8 posted 2002-12-14 03:47 AM


loved the ending especially!
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9 posted 2002-12-15 02:32 AM


Enjoyed...James
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10 posted 2002-12-15 02:50 AM


Great ending, thanks for sharing. I really like your words
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11 posted 2002-12-19 01:22 PM


Love your talent, and your mind.
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