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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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One drop of water fell upon the land Then I saw the world in a grain of sand White as mountain snow, So few white ones, Am I one in a million? Are you waiting for a sign? Sky blue eyes, told many lies, Are you lost yet in mine? Never be normal! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wind - this is really well done. Enjoyed this to-night. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Thanks Chris. I haven't seen you for a while. Where have ya been? Never be normal! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liz, you never cease to amaze me with your talented poetry.....and from someone so young, too. Thanks, little friend, for sharing your feelings and thoughts with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Thank you, Ethel. I appreciate your poetry too. Never be normal! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such a beautiful feel to this write...could see the future... ThisDiamond |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Thanks Thisdiamond, thats a way I did not see it. Interesting though. I love seeing things from other people's perspectives Never be normal! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Liz, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I wish for the truth to come whispering out of the horizon and speak to your heart! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
loved the ending especially! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Great ending, thanks for sharing. I really like your words |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Love your talent, and your mind. |
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