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Rub Her Soul
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Rub Her Soul |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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Bound within her apathy will she find a way free, To live the life of which she dreams and see beyond all she has seen? Or is she trapped in shadows past, hiding in their shadows cast? A sillouette, an empty shell, a victim of the lies they tell. Rub her soul and hope she finds, love and hope and piece of mind RG |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was so very well written and so much enjoyed. I'll look forward to reading more of your work. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I too, really enjoyed this read, and look forward to reading more.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! I really enjoyed this! ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Many thanks for the warm words and warmer welcome. I hadn't written in a year or so but since finding this forum i've been inspired, 4-5 poems posted thus far and hopefully more to come should my pen be willing. |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is really beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Dawn |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You sure did say a lot in a few words. I liked it very much. Thanks for sharing your work. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Kristine Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 92Mahal Kita!!! |
enjoyed  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Rub her soul and encourage her...show her the options..take the risk...lead her from the shadows...let light fill her silhouette... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, may all our children of the world be blessed wkith the healing and comfort of love and be fondles with loving care and faith! (sigh) You are a true angel of words, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphaela, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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