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Krystopher Morris
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since 2002-11-11
Posts 130
Ancient land called Chivalry

0 posted 2002-11-20 09:24 PM



Im sorry for all ive done
By: Krystopher Morris
My love for you,
So deep, So strong
What did I do,
That was so damn wrong?

One day,
Said "Hi",
You shunned me,
Never said hi.

I dont know what I did
I want to know why,
You did what you did.
Im sorry for all ive done

Why won't you forgive me?
Why won't I forgive you?

Im lost inside,
No way out,
Hidden secrets,
Of hate and doubt.

Im sorry for all ive done
I never meant to do what I did.

What did I do exactally?
What is it that made me wrong?
Why did I wait so damn long?

Questions, unanswerable

© Copyright 2002 Krystopher Morris - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2002-11-26 07:53 PM


Sometimes that's all we get are unanswered questions. A very heartfelt write.
regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
2 posted 2002-11-26 09:31 PM




Rejection, for no matter the reason always hurts. Sometimes we just are in the way of the arrow. Refusal for someone to talk it out only seems to make it hurt worse and add to confusion. Not blaming ourselves is a step in the right direction. Realizing some people are simply spiritually unwell sometimes helps me. Real love for someone is letting go, until they can come around.... this is a heartfelt poem. God bless and good luck to you.

hugs and warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Radrook
Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648

3 posted 2002-11-27 08:34 PM


I was reading it like this: "What did I do that was so wrong MR. Christopher Morris?

LOL!

Enjoyed!
God bless!

Krystopher Morris
Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130
Ancient land called Chivalry
4 posted 2002-11-28 01:40 AM


Thank You all for replying. Rad the names Krystopher. and im sorry for the minor language vulgarity but while I was writeing this I wasn't in the best of moods.

Poetry is love and love is life.

Shawna Fitzgerald
Junior Member
since 2003-10-09
Posts 11

5 posted 2003-10-10 09:10 PM


questions, unanswerable
true o so true
         love,
          shawna

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