Open Poetry #23 |
For Love has Come Around |
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
For Love has Come Around (with gratitude and love to my son, Jay, and grandaughter, Samantha, on her first birthday) Covered with Love Your baby hands were big even then, big enough to reach out and touch the place where love is. You waved them like wings, trying to capture the light of dust that slipped around your curved palm. You opened something with your tiny fingers, something invisible, made from heaven’s weave, then you wrapped me in it and it gave me grace. Now, with your big blanket of love, I see you have found the same fabric, for you cover her with such tenderness that I weep. I could never find the words to tell you. Now you know. (reposted from 11-13-01) My son I remember when you were two you tripped over cracks in the cement with run-down sneakers sun-drenched hair the sea in your eyes you tossed my heart about your youth as I sang in dance around the room with you in curl of whirl amazed time ticks to fast forward to you still gleam of smile in me to watch the tender hand you give for as you watch me with your child you tell me how you see now how I was with you for Love has come around again [This message has been edited by Martie (11-13-2002 02:49 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Already? She is one, already? How did you let that happen, Nana? Weren't you supposed to keep her in cuddling clothes just a little longer? How well I remember the first day... How big is your smile now? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a proud moment and a proud nana! Congrats to the birthday girl and to you!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Martie, this is soooooooo beautiful, now you have me crying because Samantha and Jay are sooooooooo beautiful and because you are a loving and wonderful mom and grandmom who these children will always be so happy to have in their hearts! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You All, sweet friend, this deeply touched my heart, we all love you so much, HAPPY 1ST BIRTHDAY SAMANTHA, YAY! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-13-2002 02:22 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
You sweet, adorable, precious little Grandma-looking thang you !! This is a special moment-of-remember ... Happy One-th Birth-of-Day to little Samantha~ (Yeah, Sis ... and in just three months from this day, My little Delaney will be one !) God has blessed both our lives ... and I thank him for the beauty of our friendship~ Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - this is so special and children and grandchildren are so special - you say that specialness so well - it touches me in my dad and grandpa spot! Loved it - paul |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Happy birthday, Sam...and what a precious little thing you are. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah, from one Gramma to another - HUGE HUGS - and Martie I don't know about you but I keep looking at my son in disbelief that he is not my child anymore but someone's Father and Husband, and does it well too. Yes Martie, love has truly come around for both you and I, and you certainly share it well from your heart in these words for your son and granddaughter. Oh my has Sam ever grown, and up on her feet already how cute is that? Now the trouble starts, and you'll have to watch everything that isn't nailed down. ~* Happy Birthday Samantha *~ Birthday hugs from Natasha and Victoria too! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee Martie...I remember the day Samantha was born. This is wonderful and what a pretty grandma this little doll has! Happy First Birthday Samantha!! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Bursting with smile for you dear lady...All the happy birthdays in the world! ThisDiamond |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Martie....smiles and congratulations. Bob |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OK Nana!!! Would you by any chance be a little biased about this whole thing....???? Beautiful he is, they are and you are... Lovely pics... Thanx for sharing this moment.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Beautiful birthday girlie...beautiful family...beautiful poetry...beautiful poet. Happy Birthday Samantha...ya got a very cool gramma there!! |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Enjoyed the way you wrote... Thanks for sharing... I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautiful pictures of your beautiful family, Martie... and with your very special touch of poetry... Your grandaughter has such a lovely and talented grandma ~ birthday hugs for little Sam and congratulations to you Lyra |
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soaring eagle Junior Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 24 |
well done martie the poetry and the family well scripted by you. cheers |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Martie, this is just beautiful. I babysat my oldest grandson to-day - he will be three in January, and memories of my daughter - his mommy came flooding back to me as I gazed into his bluest of blue eyes. What a blessing to have grandchildren. All my life's a circle. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Wow! Blessings all around. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, I just loved this! It made me feel happy and weepy at the same time! I miss my babies! Beautiful family! Your handsome son, Jay, is one proud looking daddy!--and you are one equally proud looking grandmother!--and a mighty young looking one at that! Happy first birthday to your darling Samantha! Linda |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
good poems, good pictures, great emotives. his hands look so large there, holding your grandchild... it's amazing the responsibility that we have in caring for our children. to be able to see that as love is a gift, truly. thanks Martie, for always pointing something new out to me with your words. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Geez, Martie, WE didn't get any older, how in the world did Sam reach 1 already? What a precious child, and know she has your heart all wrapped up, and how could she not...very gentle smile |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
HAPPY BIRTHDAY, LITTLE SAMANTHA..... You are a very blessed little girl. The smiles your Daddy and Grandma are wearing certainly shows a lot of love and happiness. I'm sure that you will feel it as you're growing up, too. I thank your sweet Grandmother for sharing this beautiful poem and pictures with all of us here. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thank you for celebrating love with me. I appreciate all the lovely replies. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What goes around comes around and the circle of life continues. Lovely tribute to both your son and his daughter ~ Ruth |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Marty . . . You waved them like wings, trying to capture the light of dust that slipped around your curved palm but you found words . . . what a beautiful family you are blessed . . . *smile* xxoo |
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