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Rose In My Dairy.......
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Rose In My Dairy....... |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
In lonely night...When the sky was without stars I felt so cold...And my mind was quite Laying on my bed...Watching that TV Remembering my love...And holding my heart Moving to hold my dairy...Feeling to write these simple words I opened my dairy...The dry Rose fallen Suddenly I felt that...my heart and my tears fallen too Remembering him...yes my dream man And my soul...Called his soul 26th August he gave me...This Value Rose That day I will never and ever forget Smiling for awhile...for this wonderful rose Promising to keep her...First in my hear, next in this dairy with a true emotions forever Keeping this privet memory of my life How we met together.. Exchange the look How we ate chocolate...And suffering together And I promise the Rose...That no matter what happened in this strange life I will love you forever So don’t ask me about the future…Ask your heart about me.... LOVE U Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) [This message has been edited by secretlife (11-20-2002 07:09 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sweet *s..I don't even remember those days M |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I feel great about how this poem centers in on important subjects. I like the title too. Thank you. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I felt lots of emotions and felings in your poem.....seemed to be some things written "between the lines"!?! "Love makes the world go around" |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
Very touching. Thanks for Sharing Poetry is love and love is life. |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Thanx every one.. This Rose is very important for me thats why I felt that I need to write these words even it is simple.. This man is very close to my heart, he stole my heart really.. any way thanx alot every body and thanx also for feeling me... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
even though id like to discard those petals sometimes, im glad ive kept them throughtout the years to feel that first connection again |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautifully expressed...just one small thing...is the word "dairy" meant to be "diary"? ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secretlife Enjoyed the read, but I think you mean diary. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may the rose in your heart forever blow bright with a smile! (sigh) Yay, I love it, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Thank you all, I am very happy that you read mine.. oppppps yes I meant (diary)..sorry about that. thaaaaaaaaaaaanks alot. secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 the sky is never absent of stars, they are there, just gotta wait for the clouds to clear out  |
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