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Open Poetry #23

silent moments

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2002-11-20 06:08 PM

Your eyes dance melodies over me,
Soft heavenly skin you tease me,
Any closer,
Breathing would cease to exist.

My love,
I see I've loved you before,
So familiar,
Our spirits talk.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

[This message has been edited by gemjop (11-20-2002 06:19 PM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-11-20 06:10 PM

ah recognition of another...and the effect it can have over us..
nicely done! I enjoyed!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-11-20 07:46 PM

Gemma, sure sounds like love to me.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2002-11-20 07:48 PM

gemjop - this is lovely - enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

4 posted 2002-11-20 09:22 PM

Reading this poem made me feel that time has just begun. I really like that. Thank you.

etoodog

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

5 posted 2002-11-21 07:40 AM

Oh so i'm thankful for your kind comments. And so glad that i can share, and you can enjoy with me, words of yep, definately, love.
Robert Adamson,Nightshade,garysgirl& Cpat Hair,thankyou again from my heart.
lots of love, gemma xxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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