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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2002-11-20 02:59 PM


You must go
In sorrow

Gloom

in the general brevity on the page
I submit these few words,
Naturally these few words could lead to volumes of
Following words



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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2002-11-20 03:29 PM


or...how about this spin on those 5 words:

Must you go
In sorrow?

EA

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2002-11-20 03:57 PM


leave in
grief
~~*~~
or

grieves
and
leaves
~~*~~

can't help it I have
leaves on my brain and
in my clothes
and hair

*s

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2002-11-20 04:26 PM


Sorrow
must go
with
joy


scorpio
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right...there
4 posted 2002-11-20 04:28 PM


sorrow in you
must go.

Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2002-11-20 06:18 PM


Shadows
weep sorrow
in leaving


garysgirl
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6 posted 2002-11-20 07:01 PM


Sorrow
leaves
with weeping
shadows

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
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In a corporeal internship...
7 posted 2002-11-20 10:17 PM


Sorrow
My shadow
Follow not

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2002-12-20 04:47 AM


sad
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