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Saxoness
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0 posted 2002-11-20 11:23 AM



The dusty cracked soles of my feet
are canyon tunnels for your voice.
Erosion of indecision is cutting me to the bone,
and soon only an ocean
will be able to fill the void.
Submerge me farther because
I’m already drowning.
There are no more life vests and yet
you continue to make yourself
unavailable.
The wind is howling through
my empty spaces.

I’m a storm brewing.
There is black lightning
behind my eyes,
thunder in my gut.
Smell my tears a mile away,
nail down your defenses,
bar me from your haven of assurance.
My disquiet is colliding with your safety nets
and when hot meets cold
we’ll both be sucked into a vortex.

You can’t control the weather
with carefully thought out escape routes-
there is no safety in fear,
and barriers of straw sticks and bricks
have all been left in shambles.
Root yourself to me
and I’ll protect you in the eye
of my soul-
and while the outside world
rages on,
we will be shielded
within each other.

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."
                                

© Copyright 2002 Angela Erin Burke - All Rights Reserved
gemjop
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1 posted 2002-11-20 11:28 AM


Breathlessly beautiful.....and painful.

lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2002-11-20 11:49 AM


Smiling at the clear weather...
Excellent. ThisDiamond

Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you
3 posted 2002-11-20 01:02 PM


To be rooted in love, is the only way.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Saxoness
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4 posted 2002-11-21 02:43 PM


Thank you so much for the comments. Feels refreshing to write and post once in awhile.

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."
                                

Jose Marti
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5 posted 2002-11-25 01:09 AM


that was pretty good, I liked the ending especially
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