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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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0 posted 2002-11-20 10:09 AM


My Reason

Something i may not say,
The meaning takes spirited wings,
And shall not let me speak.

Existing alive,
Tugs on every part of my mind,
You stretch me.

Blissfully weak at your souls command,
I smile to heaven,
As it passes through your eyes.

Contentment,
Fills every gap,
Every melody you are,
Every sense making thought.

Visions of what i'd questioned,
Are answered in your presence,
I asked and recieved.

I hope to one day find the courage to show this to the person in my life that inspired this poem, until then, i'll share it with you.





learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

[This message has been edited by gemjop (11-20-2002 11:24 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2002-11-20 10:21 AM


gemjop
Interesting write, enjoyed.

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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2 posted 2002-11-20 10:35 AM



Finding one such as you describe, pretty special...


Warm regards, Pat  



..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (11-20-2002 10:43 AM).]

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2002-11-20 10:50 AM


Having "asked and received", I would say that "heaven" answered your prayers and that is definitely "reason" enough to be happy!

~ happy hugs

Earth Angel

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-11-24 12:47 PM


Enjoyed...James
passing shadows
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5 posted 2002-12-15 05:25 AM


oh my, I hope you find what it takes to share it too....let that person know how you feel!
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