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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2002-11-19 08:45 AM

she’s like a sea princess
floating among the tides
beautiful like a dream
of dolphins flying
out of emerald waters
playing with mermaids
whose locks shine golden
like rays of the setting sun

‘glad you came’ she said
and the cynic in me
spoke to me in cruel words
‘she doesn’t even mean it
just look into her eyes
there is no certainty there
you can see an
ever-changing landscape
of mountains and plains
in flashes of
rapid eye movement
like currents in rivers
misty with chaste froth
yet wildly tempestuous
like the eternal mistress –
time’

but of course she has
these lovely eyes
where my sight drowns
deep into an unknown
as I feel my resolve break
crushing the cynic
like an eyeliner
put aside after use

and I silently smiled
hoping silence might hide
the discomforting fight
inside my head
but I am sure she would
have seen it in my eyes

wish I had been blind!

[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (11-19-2002 09:25 AM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-11-19 09:18 AM

but of course she has
these lovely eyes
where my sight drown
deep into an unknown
as I feel my resolve break
crushing the cynic
like an eyeliner
put aside after use

a great decription

M

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-11-19 10:50 AM

ah the eyes can and usually do say so much more than the words by themselves..

good stuff... I enjoyed

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-11-19 10:57 AM

Yes, I agree....the eyes tell things that the person sometimes wishes weren't told.
But, on the other hand, eyes speak words so adequately, that otherwise would be left unsaid.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-11-19 12:07 PM

You work magic with your style and these thoughts so well penned to lightscape.
ThisDiamond

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-11-19 12:10 PM

Well then.
Welcome home.

Smiling...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-11-19 12:15 PM

Sudhir,
Nice write, enjoyed the read. You can always close your eyes. LOL

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2002-11-19 01:09 PM

The eyes speak volumes, Sudhir... as did your poem...
Its very beautifully done

~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-11-19 01:31 PM

(smiles) Oh Sudhir, this is lovely, sweet friend, you take us through the coral reefs of your heart here and look through loves eyes so well, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) We have all missed you so much, sweet friend, you're back, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

9 posted 2002-11-21 03:44 AM

Thanks a lot, my dear friends for coming by, for responding and leaving footprints in my memory log...

Regards to all,
Sudhir

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