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In Fields of Chaff
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In Fields of Chaff |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
In Fields of Chaff With Near a Full Moon on the Lake Silver moon Which shines now like then Brightens the view of horror, Silver moon Beneath you lives end Casting moods into sorrow, Light this night Where day men did bleed, Defending home and honor, Oh night light, Your shine we now need To dig graves in fields fallow. By morning Another leaving, But at last one going home, By morning We will be grieving, Behind our dead lay alone, The full moon Falls from the night sky, Beyond the dark horizon, The new moon Will almost be nigh When the home journey is done. Gloom Other Parts of this Story Crossing In the Night /pip/Forum74/HTML/002259.html Departure Late at Night /pip/Forum74/HTML/002214.html |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
have enjoyed this story... and the form. Good Stuff Gloom |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, Professor.... |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Cpat Hair, Pleased you are enjoying The form is developing, a little loose for me But workable. Thank you, sunshine Gloom |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
just a bump..so everyone can find them all |
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