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Rick
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0 posted 2002-11-19 06:53 AM



Each scented rose of fragrance and luring beseech
Surround my core of essence and bring for what I reach
The inner heart sweet company, the mind a place of peace
Where woes of day go leaving and joy does just release



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1 posted 2002-11-19 07:02 AM



...and joy does just release...

Just, as in being equal and right,
like this!

Rick
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2 posted 2002-11-19 07:08 AM


Good morning Sunshine, nice to see your reply, always enjoyed, thank you.

Sincerely Rick

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-11-19 02:05 PM


fragrantly written, Rick...
I enjoyed reading it
~ hugs and grins

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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4 posted 2002-11-19 03:07 PM


Rick, there is really a lot in this little poem. I like it a lot. I always like to read your poetrey. Thanks for sharing with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Suetang
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5 posted 2002-11-19 03:44 PM


Such a beautiful bouquet of words you have given us Rick.  I adore roses and mine are exceptionally beautiful this year, I guess it has something to do with the drought?
May love and happiness bloom within your heart.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Kethry
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6 posted 2002-11-19 04:20 PM


Rick,
I like the depth in these words.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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7 posted 2002-11-19 10:12 PM




(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may the rose in your heart forever bloom with laughter and bliss! (big hugggssssss) nThis is gorgeous, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-11-19 10:27 PM



one simple rose can evoke such a range
of emotions, yours warm and sweet in appreciation of this beauty

Rick
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9 posted 2002-11-20 06:57 AM


Lyra, thank you for the reply, much enjoyed.

garysgirl, I am glad that you liked the poem as I do yours, thanks for the reply.

Dear Sue, dry isn't it, but the roses are looking great, Thanks for the reply, nice to see you on the page.

Kethry, thanks for reading and replying, appreciated.

Noah, always nice to read your replies, thank you.

inkedgoddess, roses are wonderful, thanks for the reply.

Sincerely
Rick

Thank you to you all.

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