Open Poetry #23 |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
From an eternal branch falls fruit as the seed was flung the blood will ever flow In the first strand of DNA Is God Take the beggar kicked and raked “Do unto thee” “Do unto Me” I cling fast to my last dollar as someone leers at me and sneers at me the eternal branch is stanched Through the seed The blood is flowing and the chances are irrefutable I am a son of God [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (11-19-2002 04:13 AM).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent Walt!!! I'm enjoying where your poetry is going lately. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Enjoyed! Glad to see you back. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is wonderful. Last line made me smile. Thanks. Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A powerful write Walty.. enjoyed very much good to read you again. Maree |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, look here. I just replied to your other poem, came back on the page, and found you again. I'm glad I did. I like the way you write, Walt. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Eliza Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 58 |
In the first strand of DNA is God ~*~ and if not God, at least his fingerprint. yes, Walt, welcome home. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanks to the half dozen of yuh..... i fel welcome |
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