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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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you absorb and are wrung and I would be your pail catching every precious drop look into your water and see my eyes |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Seems a liquid sort of night, eh? (yes, it would) Ed |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Ooh... this just wraps itself around me, Brian... A wonderful write  ~ hugs from a soggy chipmunkLyra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
glug glug?  sigh |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
yes Ed sigh a bad one down south King Knucklehead frankensteins about thanks |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
thank you Lyradiamondchip love you lady Wren? yes and yes..... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Brian, I felt like I was looking over into a pail of water and seeing a reflection of myself. It was good. "Love makes the world go around" |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
thank you Ethel and I'm glad it was good Brian |
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Kristine Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 92Mahal Kita!!! |
 Such a great poem! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Wow... this says a lot. Deb |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I would be your pail. liked this one Brian... |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Ah, a safety net for the sensitive. Lord knows they need one. Enjoyed |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Reminds me of a little something by William Carlos Williams. Loved it, bri. |
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