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He Writes.....a Love Poem for all Poets
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He Writes.....a Love Poem for all Poets |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
He Writes She eavesdropped past his poetry envisioned the man beyond his time perceived his whisperings as he spoke of sounds that tolled his chime ~ Of his daydream, she felt him deep he, never knowing of her hold as in her wake, or in her sleep she gently cupped his words of gold Oh, spells are cast, enchantment spread she heard his mind through his touch of ink to parchment or by pencil lead and drew envisioned dreams and such Reading through words of quiet calm she danced alight his sequins of sound for they beheld her required balm and wrapped, enrapt, them all around O mellifluous, then softer still coursed his heartstrung words to her by tick of time he lined her thrill as if he knew, and loved her pure, for by time’s reality, his candle bright to diminish dim, to dark surrender truth seized close by her finest light of heart’s rote evoked his splendor. She eavesdropped past his poetry as spells are cast, enchantment spread ~ O mellifluous, then softer still, she laid back the coverlets for their bed and of his daydream, she felt him deep reading through words of quiet calm and pulls his spirit to her in sleep as his words rest in her palm |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
gorgeous. it flowed like a soft, warm, and fragrant draught past my lips. beyond that speechless. -majnu |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
and of his daydream, she felt him deep reading through words of quiet calm and pulls his spirit to her in sleep as his words rest in her palm and as such...magic is worked.... very nicely done... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Such a beautiful love poem, it is. It's into my library. Thanks very much for sharing. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I like the flow of this piece.. and I like where the current takes me...  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Is there any higher praise of for one then a poem about them, let alone one as exquisite? A lucky man to earn such devine words. Thank you for sharing Lady.. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Nicely written, Lady. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A beautiful poem and I really love how you repeat the first lines in your last two stanzas! Great job!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Perchance, the Lady was reading the recently published book of poems by Balladeer? tehe I believe I know whereof you speak. The words of love, written by the poets of long ago, stand the test of time. A lovely way to slip into slumber, reading the fruits of their poetic labors. Who were these men behind the pen? They can be whoever we want them to be...... ~ Sweet dreams... EA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your words always whisper with such grace, I love the music of this! (kiss on cheek) May true love always be held close in her clutch, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, swet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A warm blanket of love, Lady in White... Excellent work  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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