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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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Seasons With great effort is love found, but effortless is its loss Now melancholy clouds even the most brilliant summer's sun My heart and soul are set adrift upon unrelenting winds Like the dying leaves of autumn, they are scattered and lost Wrapped in a blanket of ancient memories I slowly pine away Yet no warmth shall I find in these wintered emotions Hearken I must to the sweet song of the mistress passion in the womb of her eternal spring my love may be reborn. (I'm new here, just a brief introductionary poem. Not a particularly good poem but one I've often revisited and tinkered with and thus I feel somewhat defining. Love what I've read so far, many talented people to learn from.) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome to Passions--a wonderfully supportive family of poets. We read, and write, and listen! I especially loved your last two lines. Very memorable. Earth Angel |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A warm Welcome to Passions! I do believe you're going to like it around here! write with grace, all others lose face; |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thank you for the warm welcome, happy to be here |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome! And hope your eternal spring arrives. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) And we can all learn so much from you too, sweet friend, this is a sad but beautiful debut, may this special love be born again and always fill your golden heart, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Aenimal, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aenimal, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY I hope you like it here and feel as at home as I do after two months. Everyone here is so friendly and compassionate, I'm sure you will feel welcome. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more of your work. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I really enjoyed how you use the seasons for love found and lost, and - possibly - reborn again. Yes, I really liked your poem.  And welcome to Passions! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I believe it to BE a particularly good poem. I'll look for more. ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Welcome to Passions, Aenimal... I think your poem was good and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work...  ~ welcoming chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Aenimal - Welcome to Passions!! Enjoyed your first entry. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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