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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-18 12:39 PM

Transformed

I had heard
the beating
of my heart
hidden behind walls
clear silk cocoon
you saw
me wrapped tightly
captured in ice
and brought down
warmth’s hammer
shattering the silence
and the duckling caterpillar
spread her wings
to never again
be the same

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2002-11-18 12:43 PM

isnt that so neat that there are things in nature like that.. first a creature is a slimy icky caterpillar, and then it turns into a beeeeutiful butterfly

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-11-18 11:45 PM

(smiles) Oh Helen, I just find metamnorphosis to be a miracle of nature, this is magical, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-11-19 12:26 PM

This is beautiful, Helen...
I love the way you expressed the caterpiller's evolution into the butterfly

~ butterfly hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

TwoHeartsOnePen
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 60
state of determination

4 posted 2002-11-19 02:19 PM

perfection

Love is patient, indeed. It endures the distance when it seems we cannot endure it ourselves.

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

5 posted 2002-11-20 08:56 AM

ahhhhh, to be that butterfly once again--lovely!!

"I am a sky where spirits live.
Stare into this deepening blue,
while the breeze says a secret."
Jelaluddin Rumi

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-11-20 08:59 AM

Much enjoyed this beauty Helen!
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-11-20 09:01 AM

1slick_lady
metamnorphosis, enjoyed.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-11-20 09:02 AM

Oh, Helen, I know the feeling exacly !!!!

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

9 posted 2002-11-20 09:14 AM

When we can shed the coccoon and still be loved, then love is known.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

10 posted 2002-11-20 09:28 AM

smooth.... and subtle....

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