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redheart angrybraids
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0 posted 2002-11-17 02:54 AM

i am parloring new tops of gable and
treading the thread of the weaning of my line

holding only the reality of my peace of mind and
truly
i am befounded with cloth loves
from far behind
inspiring.,,
spirals of temperents in my mind

in all lush thought
and with commen bound i wonder gratfully and with out found during these times.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

© Copyright 2002 Amelia A. Ensign - All Rights Reserved

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1 posted 2002-11-17 03:02 AM

I curtsy to the queen of Zen.
(would a queen of Zen be possible...giggle)

You are such a realistic surrealistic.

I submit as evidence your opening lines:

"I am parloring new tops of gable and
treading the thread of the weaning of my line"

vivid and soft, portraying the dichotomy of the psyche and in that softly wondrous voice of yours, this yearns.

oh I wish I could think the world through your mind.

Welcome home.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-11-17 09:18 AM

Oooh this is so good!
Once more...'welcome home'...
~Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-11-17 08:59 PM

Like this...James

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4 posted 2002-11-17 09:07 PM

You've been away far too long...
welcome home!

Sandpiper
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5 posted 2002-11-17 09:34 PM

Amazing pen!!

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-11-19 12:50 PM

Very lovely...

~ hugs and grins

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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7 posted 2002-11-19 04:18 AM

WOW!

Kristine
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Mahal Kita!!!

8 posted 2002-11-19 04:23 AM

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The heart of you

9 posted 2002-11-20 09:17 AM

"The Queen of Zen", I like that.

What is the sound of amelia writing? Begs to be answered.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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10 posted 2002-11-20 09:27 AM

very nice... and it has been or seems to have been for me anyway along time since I have read your words here...

enjoyed this a great deal..

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