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one tiny snowflake |
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moonflower Junior Member
since 2002-11-17
Posts 37magical land of make-believe |
one tiny snowflake one tiny snowflake falling softly down, just one little snowflake floating earthbound exquisite and beautiful in glistening white, tumbling ever so gently on its downwardly flight only one,but then another, then yet still more, magically the sky is filled.. visually transformed as swirling flakes drift slowly down, the world is frosted, without a sound dancing down throughout the night,they transform the earth into a vision of white piling and drifting into magical shapes gracefully changing the face of natures landscape inside every soul there is music...let the music play |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Seasonly, we are almost in that fantasy land of snowflakes and magic...just close your eyes, and the season is upon us. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! write with grace, all others lose face; |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome to Passions, moonflower! Your poetry is as graceful as your name! A lovely piece for your poetic debut! If you love to read and write poetry, you've come to the right place! Earth Angel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your opening post! I will be watching for more of your work! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, I love snowflakes and snow and we get so much of it here in Colorado, this beautiful poem touched like a snowflake on a childs tongue, this is a gorgeous debut, I love it!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Valarie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Valarie, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-18-2002 11:04 AM).] |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Welcome to Passions....You'll love it here!! ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Welcome to poetry land moonflower... your imagery is lovely and your words are laced as delicately as the snowflakes you write of. So nice to have you here with us  jm No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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moonflower Junior Member
since 2002-11-17
Posts 37magical land of make-believe |
hey thanks everybody..ya'll have made me feel so warm and fuzzy inside because of your warm welcomes..i know i am gonna love it here..you are all so very kind..thank you, thank you once again..  inside every soul there is music...let the music play |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome. Your poem reads like snowflakes, falling gently upon the page. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I love how this poem flows, beautiful rythm and imagery. as a tribute to it I wouldn't dare sunder this new landscape by shovelling it, I'll let my brother do it. lol |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY Valerie.... I love your pen name and I love your poem. It's so sweet and innocent sounding. I hope that you like it here at PIP as much as I have these last couple of months. I'm sure you will, because everybody here is very warm and loving.......just like a great big "family of friends". Thanks for sharing your poem and I look forward to more of your work. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions moonflower!! Lovely first post. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
WELCOME TO PASSION'S... A great start you have with this lovely poem! Deb |
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moonflower Junior Member
since 2002-11-17
Posts 37magical land of make-believe |
awww..im speechless...you all have just made my day so happy! thanks to each one of you so much..im soooo glad y'all liked my poem..i already love it here!..thanks again... inside every soul there is music...let the music play |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Welcome to Passions, Moonflower... I love your graceful poem... and hope to see more from you  ~ welcoming chipmunk hugsLyra |
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moonflower Junior Member
since 2002-11-17
Posts 37magical land of make-believe |
thank you madame chipmunk for your very kind words about my poem..and for the warm words of welcome.. inside every soul there is music...let the music play |
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