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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2002-11-17 12:04 PM

Hope You Remember

If I am being denied
I shall try to be brave
Although the question
I’ll take to my grave

Having taken its toll
My heart slowly dies
Tears flow each day
Of not knowing whys

Hearts great sadness
There will always be
If you have no place
In your heart for me

The glimmer of hope
Fades on each thread
Heart feels wounded
I may as well be dead

In heart salty demise
I write this november
A heart broken death
I hope you remember

Hope©2002

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-11-17 12:18 PM

HopeS
That doesn't read like hope to me. And not the hope that you should see.
The poem is written well I know
My hope is that you change the so.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-11-17 12:54 PM

With a heart as sweet and tender as yours, he downright should remember!

Take care
EA

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-11-17 01:59 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Hope, I sure hope he does remember and feels for you, sweet friend, for you are a very loving person and don't deserve to be denied! (sigh) I send many angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

4 posted 2002-11-17 02:25 PM

I dont know what to say..

This is great..
Hugesss
Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-11-18 01:21 AM

This is a beautiful poem, hope... but I really hope that you have more hope than that

~ hugs and acorns

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2002-11-18 01:47 AM

Thanks to you all dear poet friends
from your caring replies ,the heart slowly mends
Hope
p.S yes my heart is returning the glow and yes he did remember

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