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Storm Rider
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Storm Rider |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA 
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Storm Rider . There was a crest of spikes across the crimson hood And spines along the shoulders The bands at the wrist of the gloves As well as the knees and ankles of the boots All channeled electricity from the lightening Back into the atmosphere . These storms were wonderful to ride thru Even as severe as they sometimes were Dragon scales absorbed the energy The rider could feel its prickle thru the body armour . The dark clouds roiled and glowed Lightening flashed continuously The near tempest force winds Produced a turbulence that could unsaddle Themost experienced rider in a moment of carelessness The rain pelted, driven with sheer velocity And the earth dwarved below . IT WAS EXHILARATING!!!!! . Enotneicna SLR 11-16-02 Words are my medicine. Read and live and love and heal! [This message has been edited by Enotneicna (11-17-2002 09:23 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I, for one, personally enjoy mystical and magical poetry of a time that the mirrored image of your name relates heavily to. Thanx for a very descriptive ride!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed this wild ride! With flashes in the nightsky and the roar of thunderous hooves. |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
Magnus........the pleasure is all mine! Midnitesun....so glad you enjoyed the ride! I decided to change the title to "Storm Rider" Many blessings Always Eno |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
And what a wild and exhilarating ride you took us on. I enjoyed this so much. Thank you. Huggles, Marti "I am not afraid of STORMS for I have learned how to sail my SHIP." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That would be one hellova a ride! Electrifying! Off into the ethers! EA |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I loved reading this. It really made the reader feel like we were riding through some kind of storm. It would have been kind of scary if you hadn't made it so exciting. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! I just love the stoems of your words, sweet friend, I would love to see this too! (big hugggssssss) Your words are always so exciting, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-17-2002 11:45 PM).] |
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moonflower Junior Member
since 2002-11-17
Posts 37magical land of make-believe |
wow..i could see the lightening and feel the tempestuous wind forces..great writing!..  inside every soul there is music...let the music play |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
Marti......EA......so glad you enjoyed the ride! garysgirl.........exciting is much better than scarey.....lol Noah...you always have such sweet things to say my dear friend. Moonflower......so glad you too enjoyed the ride!!! many blessings to you all always Eno Words are my medicine. |
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