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can't edit enough |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I thought that I would take a chance and edit thought on sweet romance... but it seems I've not the "stuff"-- I can't edit quite enough. Forgive me Ed, forgive me Nance... you smiled with me and took the chance. But I wrote some lousy words-- at least I know two people heard!  [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (11-16-2002 05:14 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Did he call your bluff? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I'll Huff and Puff and raise your Bluff. Who ya kiddin' witch? T'is always enough! Or, as I've told a Very Special Woman, It matters. Ed |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
make that three!! oh dont be so hard on yourself i share your predicament every day |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Aww Man am I getting the edited version!?  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
At the risk of being taken too seriously, I really believe that I have totally enjoyed everything of yours which I have ever read... but maybe I've read them after you've edited them  ~ hugs and grinsLyra |
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