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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-11-16 09:14 PM



Where You Are


Your poetry designs this day for me
alluring me with your lyrical words;
seduction of my heart and soul with
the sweetest songs I’ve ever heard

Mirrored crystal corridors
journey through doors of memories past
swimming azure oceans blue
of floating verse so sensually cast

On a quest with pen and quill
haunting hunger of song's desire
focusing upon your every word
that flows with flaming passions fire

This is the spirit of your muse
discovering your essence from afar
poetry etched alive with pen and quill
transcending me to where you are


Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

[This message has been edited by CSKpoet (11-16-2002 09:18 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-11-16 09:20 PM



Everything about this
is liking me...

Thank you Cheryl!

Magnus
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2 posted 2002-11-16 10:04 PM


Cher....

Somewhere....someone is smiling right now
at these words...truly blessed....

Aloha...

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Gaia
3 posted 2002-11-16 11:02 PM


What a wonderful transcendence. This is so beautifully written, Cheryl, a very special poem.
garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-11-17 09:27 AM


Cheryl, this is so beautiful. I love the way you write and look for your poems. Thanks for sharing with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-11-17 09:30 AM


Cher, this is so beautiful...
wonderful piece of work here.
~Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

regards2you
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6 posted 2002-11-17 09:39 AM




Cher,

This is one of your best. Beautiful.

This line.......

  ~ "mirrored crystal corridors" ~

Gee, that's a great image...makes me blink...  

Warm Regards,
Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2002-11-17 09:49 AM


CSKpoet
I can only add my enjoyment. The rest was covered.

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-11-17 01:17 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! You always write with such passion, sweet friend, may you forever find that speicla place with love, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
9 posted 2002-11-17 01:49 PM


Cher, this is lyrically luscious poet's song!

~ smiles across the miles
EA

secretlife
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10 posted 2002-11-17 02:36 PM


This is very nice.,.
I love your poems..


Hugess

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
11 posted 2002-11-18 12:27 PM


Wow I am overwhelmed with thanks and hugs to you all! I really worked on this a long timr for several days because I am just muse tired...Soooo I really was quite surprised at the reception this one got.
Thanks to all,
Cher

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12 posted 2002-12-26 03:34 AM


yes, I feel that way about the people here
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