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A Message |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Message ~*~ A bird left a message on my window sill, and when I turned to wipe it clean it simply said: Love shouts at you and you must be as free as me. I thought he was full of it, but I must say the message was clear. BloomingRose |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Chuckling... I am glad you only needed to see the message and that it did not land splat on your head. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Debra, this is wonderfully provoking, sweet friend, you have such amazing way of saying things, may this freedom always fill your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Debra, this is cute. I'm glad that you weren't looking in the sky when it left it's message.....it's a bird, it's a plane, it's Superman(??)....nope, it's a bird. HaHa!! Really, I liked the poem. You described it very well. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A napkin on the shoulder prior to landing perchance? Like this Debra, cute, and makes one want to think DUHHHHH, I shoulda thought of that.... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I don't know weather to laugh or to sigh.... A bird poops on your window.... Interesting, another side that i wouldn't have seen if you hadn't pointed it our to me. "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Cute write Deb! Much enjoyed the smiles it brought. ~Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Deb, I wonder what the message was when a whole flock of birdies flew over my backyard, where I was holding a family barbeque, and they left their calling cards all over our burgers?!? haha--None of us will ever forget that day! This was a fun read! Linda |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ewwww....that was quite a message that little birdie left. Although, I've heard it said that if a bird leaves a message on you, it's good luck. Oh yuk! LOL!!!! Hugs, Marti |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
its better than reading messages in their entrails like the old seers used to do! seriously cute bit. -majnu |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very cute, Deb... We live in the woods and get lots of these messages from the birds...  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I see I got a few chuckles, and for that I'm smiling too! Thanks...  Hugs, Deb |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A ( )hit and run message. Free is good. Enjoyed |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
LOL RS... Thanks, Deb |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Deb~ This is very cute...made me smile.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very neat |
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