Open Poetry #23 |
Yellow Roses (To my wife Lou, on her birthday) |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A breeze does blow, a wing does fly above the earth, into the sky. A song is sung, a tale is told of one once born, not young nor old. A life given, a new born heart A soul driven by love’s new start. One heart now beating softly in a chest rising till now from then. Life has given you one more year to treasure and keep, without fear. To hold, to touch, to live, enjoy. A girl, a woman, not man nor boy. A flower does bloom, waking now lasting treasure on bending bow. I give a rose, yellow to you. On this day of birth brought anew. Loving you easy ever strong through each day, singing you a song. Wishing that this will always be a happiest birthday to you from me. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, You old romantic. She can't help but love that. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Magnus: What an honor, this poem seems so special and precious. One of the nicest gifts to be received, I would think. How sweet. Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (11-16-2002 12:23 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A happiest birthday to your wonderful wife and please, thank her for us, that she gives you the time and space to write, and that you find ways to give her attention, just like this! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Happy Days to you and Lou. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A lovely birthday message, Barry.... Please wish Lou a happy birthday from me too! ~ lots and lots of birthday hugs for Lou and some leftover for you too, Barry Lyra |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is beautiful Barry and please wish Lou a very Happy Birthday from me. Hugs for the birthday girl, Marti "I am not afraid of STORMS for I have learned how to sail my SHIP." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Barry, this is such a beautiful and special gift to your wife. Please wish her, (Lou, is it?), a very happy birthday from me. I'm sure she's a special person to let you spend time writing for us on these pages of blue. Lou, yellow roses are my favorite flowers, too. "Love makes the world go around" |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awww! This is a beautiful birthday poem for your wife. She is a lucky lady to have someone like you. Tell her I said happy birthday! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
HAPPY BIRTHDAY LOU!! Please give her a hug from me Barry... and tell her thank you for sharing you with us! ~Hugs to you both~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is a lovely birthday poem Barry. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Barry, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all wish your Lou the happiest birthday, and may more than 18 roses always fill the vase of her heart with the special feeling of joy you give her! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You Both, sweet friends, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry How special it is to have a poet for a husband who writes such beautiful verse. Happy Birthday, Lou! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
My glass is lifted also to this beautiful woman. A true treasure that you know so well. ThisDiamond |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
How very lovely and touching! I am sure this blessed her very much. She is quite fortunate to have a husband like you, Barry Happy Birthday to Lou aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awwww! This is great Barry, betcha she loved it! |
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