Open Poetry #23 |
Friendship |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
They were sent from where the prayers all go, the saviours that all came To be there when they needed to and advocate their name There was one and sometimes many who would sooth what ached the mind To give some love, some words of kind and joy we try to find Their time was unconditional; their company was free Time around them wonderful, the way that life should be Giving to their fellow man the company of soul The privilege of a friendship, which makes a person whole [This message has been edited by Rick (11-16-2002 07:20 PM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Good Morning Rick, I like this. A good feeling in it. It just about describes my best friend except she doesn't cultivate her name. She most certainly seems like a saviour to all who know her with her unending, unselfish love and empathy....and, she seems saintlike....This poem causes me to think of past and present 'souls'... the living and those on the other side... Thanks, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rick, this is a very well-written and elegant poem. You caught the emotions just right. It's beautiful. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Pat, nice to hear from you and good morning to you as well, since my clock is now sitting on 12.03am. Thanks for the reply, sounds like you have a wonderful friend there give her all my best over a coffee or two. Sorry for the spelling mistake (come should be came) Have a wonderful day!!!! Dear Garysgirl, lovely to hear from you as well, the family is up early this morning, I did not expect a reply before I headed off to bed. I am watching the tennis at the moment, enjoying that as well. Thanks for the great reply, always appreciated. Enjoy your day!!! Sincerely Rick |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Rick, this is very well stated, with a lovely flow as always. I think a true friend is the best you can hope for in this world. Sandra |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hello again, Rick. Yes, there have been many who have graced the face of Earth with inspiration and kindness, and the messages allways point to the same word for me. Love. Enjoyed the write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick Good write, enjoyed the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Rick, this is wonderful, sweet friend, we all must treat other like brothers and sisters and if we all give unto one another the world can be the next best thing to utopia! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rick, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Rick... It does not get much better than this.. Very well said .. thanx.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely write Rick, enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Rick, this is more than good... this is a ... Thank you! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Friendship is indeed a blessing. Especially if the friend sticks closer than a brother; and some do. Enjoyed your poem. Deb |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sandra, thanks for the reply, as always very much appreciated. Midnitesun, nice to hear from you again, thank you for the reply, may love find us all. Seymour, great to hear from you again, always appreciate your replies. Noah, you light up I am sure many hearts with your wonderful commments, thanks for your reply. Vandana, glad you enjoyed, thanks for the reply. Magnus, what a wonderful complement you have just given, thank you heaps. Dear Sunshine, glad you could shine on this page with you reply, again thank you. Dear Deb, I enjoy your reply, glad you had a read, much appreciated. Thank you all my friends, till we meet again. Sincerely Rick |
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