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jstewart Junior Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 11 |
the wind blows cold the leaves are stirred a dark summer day where war occured no smiles are present the sun went away heading for home to live another day the home is wrecked the walls were tough the bombs flew in brick wasn't enough searching for food carrying no luck hungry for peace but only had duck heading for bed time to shut eyes tomorrow the same nothing a suprise |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
sounds like the duck had two hum-drumsticks o yuh!! |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
This is an excellent poem and a sad topic You described it very well! aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Jeffrey, this sounds so sad, sweet friend, I hope this doesn't relate to you as I send angel hugs out to you and everyone else who may feel this emptiness every now and then! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeffrey, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jeffrey, this is a very well written poem. It's so sad, though. A lot of truth and emotion in it, too. "Love makes the world go around" |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
I felt your despair. You have relayed it well. Thanks for putting this emotional expression on record. SimplyGold |
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