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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Soft descent of sparkling silence lay your blanket 'round me now, it's caress shall be as welcome as departed breath of spring. Lending respite to the torment fraught within this fevered brow, in one glorious still moment when all cares have taken wing. Radiant, reflective solace, in your crystal purity, as if stardust from the heavens has been visited on Earth, to re-new lost sense of wonder and the child inside of me, will this chilling pause soft tip the scales towards a new found birth, of rainment of the gods spread sleek o'er undeserving man, just to be a part of this, is more can understand. Doc [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (11-16-2002 09:24 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"to re-new lost sense of wonder and the child inside of me" The ultimate quest? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! Doc, this is fantastic! Very very well done! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Midnitesun, Thanks, they are all "ultimate quests" aren't they, to express in words that others can relate to? Doc Denise, Thank you. You are so kind. If I remember correctly, you have a penchant for sonnets, perhaps Santa will bring you one for Christmas. Doc |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
That would definitely be an extra-special treat, Doc! I look forward to it!  |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
the couplet sums it up so well. nice piece. -majnu |
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