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Open Poetry #23

Helicopter

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-11-15 04:43 PM

Helicopter wind
Spinning fall leaves bright as jewels
In a whirlwind

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2002-11-15 04:57 PM

You captured that perfectly. Enjoyed!

Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-11-15 05:23 PM

You capture your past memories so elegantly,
nicely done Cher..

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-11-15 08:07 PM

Very good, Cher....I could see the leaves spinning around.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-11-15 08:32 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love the metaphor here and too just love when the wind picks up the leaves like plastic bags in the air! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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