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Blending Colors
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Blending Colors |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Above Foreboding tea steeped cotton shroud Break free the morn in dabbling sheer With free form stroke of pallet proud True blue these arts of will to hear I know no wiccan ways The time has come for colors bold Break free the morn of dark and gray With breath to bear the rainbow hold True essence of our hearts to say I sing no temptress songs Without you there is dark and dim Break free the moments crimson pinch With every thought to deepen in True sun this time of yellowed flinch I cannot sprinkle dreams with pine Forever green in hues demure Break free the mum of inner fight With warm regard and soft allure True blue to violet bends the light I do not take against your will The arch of love to bend each hill Break free the narrow colder road With glee form stroke sent softer still True grows in worth a love rain bowed Below I Stir Copyright Kkh 11/15/02 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (11-15-2002 10:05 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh my, all this from a cup of tea? then let me break the fast with thee! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very interesting...and very well done... intriquing thoughts i had while reading... demanded another read...and perhaps later yet another.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, your gorgeous words always make me smile, I love rainbows so so much and have been blessed to see double rainbows sometimes too and them bleed together, it makes me think of God and Shekinah's smiles together! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ThisDiamond "The time has come for colors bold Break free the morn of dark and gray With breath to bear the rainbow hold True essence of our hearts to say" The entire poem is beautiful, and deeply colored. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is wonderful. It is so rich with colors. A lovely write. Enjoyed. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, this deserves an additional read or two or three...each bringing to light yet another thought of the feel within the lines...so soft, yet so alluring... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Loved the many hues in this. Artistically painted imagery, which will blend with my other favorites. Thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond Good thoughts, good write, good read, enjoyed. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This one I'm keeping. Loved every stanza and the wonderful use of imagery.  Michael The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is absolutely gorgeous, Kathy... I think its your best yet... and thats saying a lot because they are all good!  ~ loving hugs from the rodent from KzooLyra |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
~Pristine~ ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (11-17-2002 10:16 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, I love the rainbow you painted with these beautiflly elegant words. I'll be back to read again, too. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
ThisDiamond~ This is so beautifully penned. I enjoyed this very much. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-18-2002 04:52 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
A treasure of gold to see and to hold. Wonderful write Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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