Open Poetry #23 |
Beauty is Awareness |
Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Fear the unfamiliar waits behind each unopened door fear that is crippling never knowing what's in store Courage Taking a deep breath (hold it in!) just before I turn the key anticipating the gift that waits prepared and eager to see... Acceptance Bright lights illuminate my soul A magnificant and glorious discovery! There is no greater gift Then the gift that is just me. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
you know, i was just thinking about you the other day and here you are, giving us poetry. hope you're doing well lady, looks like you've come back with a positive glint of hope. like this, i do. hugs C yeah well, sometimes i can't spell... *rolls eyes* [This message has been edited by Christopher (11-15-2002 01:31 AM).] |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Wow! This is really a wonderful poem! I absolutely love the way you go from fear to courage to the acceptence (and awareness) of yourself in this last stanza.. Bright lights illuminate my soul A magnificant and glorious discovery! There is no greater gift Then the gift that is just me. Thank YOU for this gift of illumination and awareness of a greater truth. I needed the reminder. Tammy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi, good to see you again. This does sound positive. Nicely done, too. Sandra |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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