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angsana Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 77 |
Quiet Wishes I've sneaked back to be with my soul for yesterday I was still walking with my restraining heart On awkward roads... somewhat... I've walked As I thought of us, I could hear my silent pleas as the teardrops trickled down one by one ... Yet, I still heard the laughters...my own silly laughters ...so spontaneous ... and warm too I was once happy I can be happy again ... Little by little, I began piecing myself together like tiny Lego blocks ...till where I am standing today tall and ... somewhat strong Within the concrete of me I hold my quiet wishes everyday that I never have to fall again, not... this way angsana |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a lovely first post Angsana! Your quiet wishes are described beautifully in this piece, with phrasing as delicate as a whisper. Very much enjoyed ... I hope to read more from you.  Welcome to Passions!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
angsana, beautifully done! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful poem. I can relate to what you have said here. And, I hope you never to fall, again. Welcome to passions! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Angsana....WELCOME TO PASSIONS... ~May you always hear laughter~ It is my favorite state of mind. This is a lovely first post. Almost delicate in nature, yet conveying strength and hope and determination. Very Good. Thank you for posting it. Hugs and warm regards to you, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yes, you will be happy again and I know you will, for you are so deserving of true joy filling your heart! This is a gorgeous debut, sweet friend, you express yourself so well, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Angsana, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Angsana, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your first post! I look forward to seeing more or your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Within the concrete of me I hold my quiet wishes everyday that I never have to fall again, not... this way" I liked this part best....the heart can relate Welcome |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Angsana, a most beautiful entrance into Passions! You're going to like it here...a soft spirit is always Most Welcome! Karilea |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Such wishes ... ... such strength!! Such posibilities!!! Welcome to PASSIONS! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hello and Welcome to Passions. This is a wonderfully supportive family and we look forward to seeing more of your work. I like your first post and it seems you are walking a journey that is taking you forward into good light. Huggles, Marti "I am not afraid of STORMS for I have learned how to sail my SHIP." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Incredibly good post! Welcome, angsana. Keep those legos in place and keep posting. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry...I enjoyed your first poem very much and look forward to reading more of your words... ...believe what your heart feels... [This message has been edited by scorpio (11-13-2002 10:20 AM).] |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Nice poem.. And welcome to passions! I just know you are going to love it here... I dont think there is one person who didnt like it here.... I wish i could of greeted you earlier but my computer crashed, and had to fix it.. Thank you for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Cherished Angel New Member
since 2002-11-13
Posts 5West Virginia |
I think we have all been to this point at one time or another in our lives, we have to go on living, trying to piece our lives back together once again. You will be happy again, just give it time. Cherished Angel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions!!!!!!!!enjoyed |
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angsana Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 77 |
Dear wonderful passionate friends, I am really excited to read your generous comments. Thank you for telling me that you've enjoyed reading. I believe this place of Passions is one that I can build myself to ONE FULL PIECE!! Love ya all... angsana |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Welcome to Passions, Angsana... What a lovely and delicate first post  ~ poetic chipmunk hugsLyra |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
nice entrance to passions. it's been said before, but i'll say it again. welcome!! /jen/ what if they gave a war, and nobody came... |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
i like to steal kit's smilies. it's m'job.  muhahahahaha. /jen/ what if they gave a war, and nobody came... [This message has been edited by quietlydying (11-14-2002 03:37 AM).] |
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Kristine Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 92Mahal Kita!!! |
Great poem! |
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angsana Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 77 |
Lyra and Kristine, thank you for stopping by. quietlydying, that's a scary smiley you've stolen!!  angsana [This message has been edited by angsana (11-14-2002 09:10 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Lego blocks....neat |
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